English Test 5
It used to be that when people wanted to see a
scary movie they could choose from films such as
Dracula and Frankenstein. But these classic monster
movies, with some exceptions, has been replaced by a
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different breed of horror film the slasher movie. It is
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interesting and perhaps somewhat disturbing to examine
what such changes in taste may indicate about some of
the values at work in our nation.
First: commercially successful low-budget
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chiller was Halloween, and in its wake psycho-slasher
films have the movie market glutted. The formula for
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these movies consists of the serial murder of teenagers
by a ruthless psychotic, with some humor thrown in. The
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fact of the matter being that the popularity of the series
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of Friday the Thirteenth movies and their hundreds of
silly imitators indicates that there is a huge market for
such portrayals of random violence. Indeed, filmgoers
appear to cast their votes for more and more graphic
forms of violence. As a result, filmmakers—those who
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actually made films—generate increasing gory
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productions.
As a result of this trend, slasher films now
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represent mainstream Hollywood movies. Once limited
only to the periphery (fringe) of the movie industry, the
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exploitation of gore has become a major box office
attraction. Older slasher films such as Psycho actually
seem like classics in comparison. Now they’re many
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high grossing franchises that produce countless sequels
like Halloween 20: H2O. These movies have made a big
wad of cash! [#11]
Although the popularity of such films has
declined somewhat as their novelty has worn off.
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However, they remain a standard feature of the yearly
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production schedule. Even many high-budget films have
adopted the slasher formula of chills and violence. More
recent films, such as Scream, examine the slasher
movie’s formulaic conventions, while the Scary Movie
series plays them for laughs. Are these movies a means
of harmless fun? Are they a reflection of an increasingly
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and ever more violent society? Or do such movies
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encourage violence? Considering the great changes both
within the movie industry and in public (human) taste,
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these are questions that we must begin to consider. [#15]
Question 1
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have been replaced
were being replaced
replaced
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film, which is the
film: the
film known, as the
Question 3
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First;
The first
First—
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(Place after have)
(Place after movie)
(Place after wake)
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The fact of the matter being
The popularity
Factually speaking, in terms of popularity,
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–those making the films, actually
(which are the people making the films)
OMIT the underlined portion.
Question 7
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increasing, gory,
increasingly full of gore,
increasingly gory
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trend:
trend—
—trend—
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periphery
periphery (that is, the fringe)
periphery, fringe,
Question 10
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they are
there’s
there are
Is the final sentence of this paragraph appropriate?
No, because it is irrelevant to the topic.
No, because its reference to money, while relevant to the topic, is inappropriate in tone.
Yes, because the exclamation with which the sentence ends heightens the drama.
Yes, because it clarifies the preceding sentence.
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off, and they
off, so they
off, they
Question 13
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more, and more, and more violent society
increasingly violent society
increasingly violent society, with anger and blood
Question 14
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public, and human
public
human’s
How can this essay best be described?
The tone is serious; the purpose is to point out a significant change in entertainment.
the tone is lighthearted; the purpose is to recommend a new form of entertainment.
The tone is sarcastic; the purpose is to show how contemporary movies lack value.
The tone is harsh; the purpose is to urge people not to attend slasher films.